OK! I was originally going to post Tari's story first, but hey, at least I'm still posting it right?
sorry to confuse you or mix up stories, but to prevent any spoilers, I'm going to have to be careful with what I submit.
perhaps a beta reader could be used?
either way, here's the start to Tari's life, using a little flashback presentation. Then going back to his past.
hope it came out ok ^^
Henry the sergal belongs to my dear friend
just to clear it up, Tari has a synthetic arm. He removes it from the shoulder socket when he goes to sleep at night, using a cloth cover to keep dust and lint out. HOWEVER, he doesn't obtain this synthetic arm until much later on in his life, as in he doesn't have it in the flashbacks, unless I include it in the writing.
sorry for the crappy ending, my dad forced me to shut down my laptop before I was finished writing. I'm lucky to have gotten what I have as it is. what a damn grouch...